"So I just don't understand
Why I hold open the door
I really want to hate you
But I want to love you more"

Great stanza! Really really good! I could relate to this once! Not anymore of course! lol Great job!
xoxo

Gem, You express things so good. Love reading your poems each one is a joy in itself! Great job!

LOL good job...good concluding last lines. That last one really got to me!
I liked this one a lot!
Charisma*

Aww u and marcus seem really cute together. the poem was great. xx

They say there's a thin line between love and hate....glad you found yourself on the love side :) cute poem 5/5

Writen straight from the heart by someone really in love, your poems always touch me soo deep because i can always relate :)))

Really well written, I`m glad you have him now.Nice pic by the way ,your a pretty young girl ,you remind me of my daughter. thank you for your nice comments.

Another one i can relate to and just like you, me and boyfriend went through the same stuff... another great one :)

Nice poem, i really liked it

Cool write 5/5

Hey Gemma, did you know you're a reserve in a contest. She's holding out to judge till all entries are completed. So I thought I'd remind you! Thanks!
Charisma*

Hey thanks for the comment awsome poem by the way

peace

I really like this poem, I am sure a lot of people can relate to this. My favorite part was the last stanza

"So I just don't understand
Why I hold open the door
I really want to hate you
But I want to love you more"

Great job!

Ahah cute stuff btu thats why its called lvoe you gotta live for moments liek that. great stuff.

lissa