Debbie, This is so beautiful. The diffrent faces we put on to hide our inner feelings. Your words are like a cloak. Excellently done. Love reading your poetry.

I would take out the silent in the last line. But other than that, the last stanza was very good and by far the best. I love the line about the cloak of false content. What a picture painter!
Amazing!
Charisma*

Very clever. I like this a lot. 5/5

Very good write. nice words. 5/5

Oh my god this is an amazing poem! Wow I read it over twice. Your an excellent poet!

Wow, your imagery and your words were greatly used. I loved it. Keep up the fantastic work.

Peace, Joe

So good....

Barry

So sad......

Barry

You are...........

Wonderful, beautiful poem! I loved the imagery in it. Very touching and sad, but amazing . . .