Oh this almost sounds sad, like you could make it longer and expound on some lost love who always leaves you. Man I loved that ending! I know you prob meant this to be funny but at the end I could just see this lonely girl their in the rain looking for this boy, and then almost picture her at like 17 still looking and him still being the same old jerk. You know? Man, you should do that! lol !
Seriously!
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Great job! So glad you added more. It's so good! Thanks for your sweet comment. And honestly, I'm shocked you took my advice...! But THANKS! It's so cool!
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