I love the way the words flow in this one, it's beautiful, the phrases you wrote are gorgeous too, it really shows true love and what its like.
Very well done
5/5
*Gem*

WOW...I really like your poem love is a very scary thing! If it is falling in love with someone new thats even scarier

Beautiful poem!
Thanks for the comment

Wow nice poem and nice write. I really enjoyed this work of yours. I look forward to reading and enjoying more of your thoughts put to paper. May 2007 be a good year for you…peace

Great poem it has alot of passion. It flows right together. Great job! Keep it up. keani lovez koa