Wow excellent job on your poem. very descrptive. Loved reading it!

I agree. very descriptive. i luved it. keep writin!

Nicely done. The last part just didn't really match the whole rhythem of the poem and the flow.You used aaaa instead of what I saw in your other stanzas abcb. Still a wonderful poem.
I'll give you a 5/5 God Bless

~Tay~