Comments : Why Me?

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Really good job on this poem. Isn't it funny when we love somone so much. They are always in our minds. I really enjoyed this one.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Good job!
    I thought the flow was a bit shaky, and one suggestion I had was for this line.
    Because its only me I can blame.

    Maybe it could read "because there's only me to blame." I think it flows better, but that is JUST a suggestion!
    Charisma*