Comments : Love:[

  • 18 years ago

    by Freddie

    Thats so sad! I so kno where ur coming from tho. luved how each sentence had an aa rhyme patern. well done! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rosie

    I usually don't comment peoples but I like this one. And I think I'll rate it too, it's very good 5/5