Comments : I gave you my soul

  • 19 years ago

    by Cindy

    A very well put together piece.
    So I give you my soul in friendship
    and may it forever remain with you.
    I really loved the last lines of your poem. Excellent job!

  • 19 years ago

    by xmaslolly

    Thank you cindy
    ive never written a poem before but needed to get it off my chest and i think its a habit i will be keeping :-)