Good job. Minus a few minor things in flow, these two lines are the only ones I would suggest editing, because they are way longer than the rest and throw off the flow to such a nice poem.

But I will have to wait until then
and...
But I can't and I don't have a chioce
Hope that helps
Charisma*

I Luv It, it's awesome!
but i do agree with Charisma*
=] keep up the great poems=]

~*Kendal*~