Comments : Emotional Ocean

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    This is great! Great imagery! Really lovely!
    xoxo

    P.S. I added some stanzas to "Still Here" Check it out!

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I really loved these lines:

    And on it's waves where no man can stay
    Is peace and serenity all through the day

    I'm not sure if this is what you meant by it but to me it was saying that where man doesn't reside is the prettiest because we can't ruin it, lol. But great job either way. Love it again! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    You have added a wonderful picture in my mind this morning, thanks for the words and thoughts you have which have found their way to paper. Bravo