Wow this is gorgous! I always love non-ryhming poems because they show true character in a weird way thoa!
Great job!
5/5
xoxo-am

You really poured your heart out in this. Excellent job!

WOW THIS IS REALLY GOOD BECAUSE IT REALLY SHOWS ALL UR EMOTIONS. I REALLY LIKED IT AND HOPE EVERYTHING WORKS OUT BETWEEN U GUYS. AND THANX FOR COMMETING ON MINE.

Wow, i love the way u express yourself! lots of nice similes and mathaphors :P

xxDeLie

I hope he read it.

Wow.. you've put emotions into words that i never thought possible.
these are the feelings i sit with every day, unable to portray.
you're amazing.
keep up the beautiful writing.

You put amazing thought and emotion into this poem. Your expressions and descriptions are very well written, showing how you really feel. The last sentance strengthens the poem, and it's a great title with alot of meaning. You're right, sometimes Love simply isn't enough, as sadly i, as well as many others like yourself, have found out. I do hope you work things out though. Good luck. =]
5/5 For an excellent poem. Keep them up.

Tammie