Luved the repitition u used. well done. great poem!

Great job! I loved the way you set it up!
Great write!
xoxo

Good job i think 5/5

Your smile,
Your touch,

Your hurt,
Your lust,

Your hair,
Your face,

Your mind,
My chase....

repeated thru the poem really made this poem excellent. i loved it so so much. great write.

5/5 your friend David

Wow its amazing. i love it =] 5/5

Good, I'm glad shes leaving. Don't ever take that kind of abuse.

This is a really good poem gurl you got a skill!
MucH LovE!

Another nice one!

I love it poem!
it was full of emotion!!!
great write!!!
5/5
--Jess
=]

This poem is so sad...I espically liked the ending...It was really touching....
Take care