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Luved the repitition u used. well done. great poem!
by TRAGiC BEAUTY
Great job! I loved the way you set it up!
by Tricky Daze
Good job i think 5/5
repeated thru the poem really made this poem excellent. i loved it so so much. great write.
5/5 your friend David
Wow its amazing. i love it =] 5/5
by Someones Sanity
Good, I'm glad shes leaving. Don't ever take that kind of abuse.
by just a little bit hurt
This is a really good poem gurl you got a skill!
by dawn green
Another nice one!
by Beautiful Disaster
I love it poem!
it was full of emotion!!!
by Reminders Torture
This poem is so sad...I espically liked the ending...It was really touching....