Comments : Your Smile, Your Touch

  • 13 years ago

    by Freddie

    Luved the repitition u used. well done. great poem!

  • 13 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Great job! I loved the way you set it up!
    Great write!
    xoxo

  • 13 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Good job i think 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by David

    Your smile,
    Your touch,

    Your hurt,
    Your lust,

    Your hair,
    Your face,

    Your mind,
    My chase....

    repeated thru the poem really made this poem excellent. i loved it so so much. great write.

    5/5 your friend David

  • 13 years ago

    by holly

    Wow its amazing. i love it =] 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Someones Sanity

    Good, I'm glad shes leaving. Don't ever take that kind of abuse.

  • 13 years ago

    by just a little bit hurt

    This is a really good poem gurl you got a skill!
    MucH LovE!

  • 13 years ago

    by dawn green

    Another nice one!

  • 13 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    I love it poem!
    it was full of emotion!!!
    great write!!!
    5/5
    --Jess
    =]

  • 12 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem is so sad...I espically liked the ending...It was really touching....
    Take care