I loved reading it! It was so descriptive! Made me feel like i was there myself! fantastic! xx

Oh I so enjoyed reading this! Beautifully written.

Wow. This was really really good! Excellent vocabulary.. Amazing imagery. I loved the repitition of the beginning & last stanza. It really made them stand out! It flowed really well. And was very sad. Kept my attention all the way through.

Excellent job, Hun. Keep it up.

Bri.x