Comments : First Love

  • 17 years ago

    by Goth

    Ok... I read this one last night .... kinda feels like you talking about... oooops. never mind!

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    I know how you feel, it had happen to me, it is not easy to forget your past love as it really hurt,
    another great poem by you, and another 5/5 from me.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Awe, this is sad. Young love that breaks your heart. I think almost everyone has experienced this. Nice poem. Just a thought, you could title it "First Love" or "Heartbroken"