I like it! I love it when you expressed the feelings of a person who miss his loved one... Keep it up! 5/5

Awww that is sweet i like the last verse or part it is touching. well good job 5/5

I loved your poem. I can relate to it. Hope you would read some of mine.

What a beautiful poem. The emotion in this are great. The love you write of must be a very deep love. Excellent job!

I loved it

Omygosh...that's a really good poem! i love it. check out some of mine sometime. :)

Yeah....here's another one for literally another one....you're such a s....never mind...but still I guess it's alright...I'm so glad you learned how to finally write...it took you long enough.

I really enjoyed your poem, good job, read mine and comment if u wish

This sounds like a song
its really good

Niece poem :) keep up the giid work long but good :) ttyl
Mary

That was a real cute poem!! I really liked it!! :D

This is an amazeing poem i love it great work btw

I LOVE THIS POEM... ITS REALLY GOOD!!

~loveingsomeone~

Wow this poem is beautiful! i love it!

I love this damn poem it made me cry

Loved this poem so much. I has so much feelings described. Keep it up!!

WOW, this is excellent stuff, i was near to tears at the end as i miss my boyfriend right now! it flows and has a really natural rhyming pattern, keep up the excellent work!

Great poem. 5/5

I lvoe this poem and eventhing that it reprosents !! love you Randi

Aww....this poem is so sweetly written