Fantastic !!love it .you write exactly how i want to.its amazing how you find the exact right words.could you read my poems and maybe give me some advice

Timeless and very well written. Love it!

Wow nice poem and nice write. I really enjoyed this work of yours. I look forward to reading and enjoying more of your thoughts put to paper. May 2007 be a good year for you…peace

You both dwell on the past way to much!!!!! don't hate the time thats here and now, it won't help it go any quicker, simply become closer in relationship, and look to the future.
thats the best advice you'll get, and it's all I have to say, which I know you already know.. Im just .. not in the best mood..

I like all your poems.. my advice, Keep writing ;)

I like it, your a better writer than me I think. Dwelling on the past, isn't a bad thing. When the past is full of love and commitment.. i love you Sarah :)

Great poem it wuz a little bit short but o well i liked it a lot thought it wuz real good nd it wuz thoughfully written nd da flow was ok...5/5.

Ah it was so good.