Aww..what a cool little poem...i like how abstract it is

Ah, this kind of poetry is so difficult to write. Great job. I adore the descriptions and imagery. :) *5/5

"Trees in sunlight"

That was supposed to be the last line, lol. It's supposed to be completely mirrored so the second part would start with "Renewed, is all" then "Harmonious is all" and so on.
But you got the words so perfect! Well done
*Gem*