This is trully an amazing poem i loved it soo full of emotions :) this on is really really good :))

Wow that really was a dark poem but it was good at the same time loved it

Uh a truely amazing poem/story. Its so dark that its absolutely brilliant!!!
i thought it was great, excellent imagery, i could see everything in my mind. I think its quite different from anything else you have written! This poem i love it, love it, love it:)

Kelly
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