so many times i wanted to die, but i never thought of the people i would be leaving behind. thanks!

That was the best one yet! I'm glad that the person didnt die. Keep writing more! Im really enjoying them.

Melanie~
Wow, thanks, that means so much to me! I have so many more poems then this, but I delted all of them but that series, and the last one, I have about 150, wow, i love you! Thanks so much! :-)

Hey Dani, im really not sure why any would would give this poem any less than a 5, its truly amazing. You are such a brilliant poet, probably my favourite one in fact. All 5 parts of this poem were shit hot, just fantastic. You have a god given talent. xx

Wow that was so good, all 5 of them. I dont even know what to say. these poems made me so emotional, I dont understand how people can be so cruel. You are one of the most gifted writers I have ever had the pleasure to end. Keep it up!

Wow!! That was really good. All of the poems together make such a beautiful story. Great Job!!!!

i read every one they were all fantastic your a great writter and dont ever stop

~briana~

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!it was truly excellent(5)