The topic is sad, yet you don't make it depressing. That's great, reading about a little girl that is either ignorant, or simply makes the best of her circumstances. Good write good write!

Aw I loved this poem, its so sad, yet also so beautiful and full of hope. And you managed to capture all of that in this short little poem. The title is what drew me to this in the first place.. very creative and very fitting to the poems message. It also showed the power of a child's imagination and how strong children can be in the face of adversity. Wonderful write, thanx for sharing it with us all.

I like it, lots of emotions

Wow Terra, this was really good! I loved the imagery I got from it! Deep but it was soo good! It's sad the way things have to be...
5/5
.~.heartcha.~.
Ciao~