Great poem! I had to read it because you said that it was inspired by my two! thanks for all the great comments!! =]

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Wow.. you have talent for taking such simple things and making them into a poem.. i love it.. this is the best poem ive read by you so far and i especially love this line

"Her eyes now set for a night of false smiles"

idk why lol

Very well done, you may have side covering the lies, a bit too much, but other than that. I liked it.
Making a shadow, coving up lies
In that line shouldn't it be covering?
Just a typo.

I like how you listed the lipstick number. I think that added great effect to your poem!
Congrats on winning!
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Wow.. I really love the reality within your poems. Like how you are very descriptive when you right like "Cherry Red number 502" It gives the poem a nice effect. I think my favorite part of the whole poem would have to be the ending. It was a very good way to end this poem. Great job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!