Good poem i like it. But maybe you could try to ryme it a little better, but other then its good

Good poem i like it. But maybe you could try to ryme it a little better, but other then its good

Nice, i think we al can undersand what is being said.

Good poem i liked it... it was cool actually the way you put it. 5/5 keep it up

Very beautiful poem good work keep it up 5/5
i'll be glad if you vote and commet for my poems

Very clever. i liked your rhyming use, and how the second and third lines rhymed, but then you through in the original a,b,c,b thing. very good. keep up the good work.

MBHD

Great pom:) i think ere girl culd relate 2 this one...i like the way u worded it.. keep up the great work.. 5/5

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