I really liked this poem. you made my favorites!

Lol i love this poem and definitely the title

What a sad poem! made me want to cry... Congrats on first place, you earned it! =]
Ciao

The true bond of sisterhood = The true bond of a sisterhood

That some day soon
Things will be of smiles =
That some day soon she'll be rescued
that she'll never let go. Try to remember that syllabication is important.

This poem does not seem finished.

I'm not sure about this poem... The poem overall is OK, but it isn't GOOD.... It's just... not there for me and I'm not sure why. Obviously, the poems come from your heart and I suppose that i shouldn't be judgemental but i think you need to focus on giving your poems flow. Make each line the same syllable count as the others.

OK poem,
4/5
~Stephen White