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Sad, but very deep. I loved the verbal imagery in this poem. The emotions were so strong that I could certainly feel the sadness between each line. Great poem! Hope to read more of yours! =)
I really loved this poem. It is very deep, you can really feel the emotions through your words. Great Job. Keep up the good work!
I think this is a very good poem bridgette, it should be in the lost love section, very emotional poem, great flow for a nonrhyme poem, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!
by Mommy And Me
Deep and powerful poem. great imagery to. i could really feel the emotion that you have portrayed here. good work
Could use some flow, but other than that it was very well written. The emotion and depth were very good, as was the heart. Nicely done! 4.5/5
Wow, it flowed really well. And it was so sad. I can totally relate to this. It was so very powerful and deep. I could feel the emotions pouring out while reading the words. And the vocabulary was great. Keep it up. It was absolutley amazing..
That was really sad, but it flowed perfectly. It was very powerful, too. You really expressed well what you were trying to say.
"Shredding any ounce of self esteem that remain" - I think it should be 'remains' instead of 'remain'.
Anyhow, nice job. 5/5.
by Italian Stallion
For a non-rhyming poem this was very well written. The flow and the strucutre were both good. Awesome write. I loved it.
That is amazing!!! keep on writing
by Never URs
This is really creative good job!! keep it up!