Comments : We're at Our Breaking Point

  • 13 years ago

    by Rona

    Sad, but very deep. I loved the verbal imagery in this poem. The emotions were so strong that I could certainly feel the sadness between each line. Great poem! Hope to read more of yours! =)
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by XxChelseaXx

    I really loved this poem. It is very deep, you can really feel the emotions through your words. Great Job. Keep up the good work!
    ♥Chelsea

  • 13 years ago

    by Bryan

    I think this is a very good poem bridgette, it should be in the lost love section, very emotional poem, great flow for a nonrhyme poem, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Deep and powerful poem. great imagery to. i could really feel the emotion that you have portrayed here. good work

    -/2 Terra

  • 13 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Could use some flow, but other than that it was very well written. The emotion and depth were very good, as was the heart. Nicely done! 4.5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Wow, it flowed really well. And it was so sad. I can totally relate to this. It was so very powerful and deep. I could feel the emotions pouring out while reading the words. And the vocabulary was great. Keep it up. It was absolutley amazing..

    Bri.x

  • 13 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    That was really sad, but it flowed perfectly. It was very powerful, too. You really expressed well what you were trying to say.

    "Shredding any ounce of self esteem that remain" - I think it should be 'remains' instead of 'remain'.

    Anyhow, nice job. 5/5.

  • 13 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    For a non-rhyming poem this was very well written. The flow and the strucutre were both good. Awesome write. I loved it.

    Peace, Joe

  • 13 years ago

    by Kaylee

    That is amazing!!! keep on writing

  • 13 years ago

    by Never URs

    This is really creative good job!! keep it up!