This is sad...and true...good job!

Wow!
This was so very sad...but such a pleasure to read!
I have tears in my eyes from reading this.
The flow was perfect, the imagery astounding and I enjoyed the rhyme scheme.

This poem is so true, every word, every line, every verse.. perfect
much love and many kisses,
bex

It made me cry because it brought back memories, eh.

You did a great job with this poem. It gives a great description. I could imagine the house, the feelings, and when it said " tears are falling hitting hard" I imagined a huge tear shaking a house.
You're a great poet, and I love your way of writing.

<3 Teria.