Comments : Oh Baby.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    The beauty of the first love. This is a wonderful poem. I can feel the love you have for your special person. Excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so sweet!
    I loved this, particularly the last line, that really stood out.
    I think you did an excellent job on this, it is one of my favourite poems on the site.

    **For some reason the site kept stealing my text when I tried to leave a comment on Here's to going back.
    I thought that one was well written as well, and a pleasure to read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww... this is such a sweet and heartfelt poem. The repetition of "Oh Baby" before each stanza gave the poem a very nice effect and it really felt like you were talking to this person, except in poetic form. lol. Really good job on this! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Aww!! That was adorable. I loved the heart felt moments in this one. Got to be the best I have read. Good work, Brianna. 4.7/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Layla.

    Freaking 25 bazillion/5 i loved it.
    it had an akward truth to it.
    keep it up. :)