This is a very good one steph, loved how it flow without rhyme, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

I enjoyed this poem, what you said was very true. =) Thanks for the comment on mine too. Keep up the good work.
-Ally

Nice poem thanks for your comment on "Babe's story"

Nice poem with great emotion however I felt it ended ubruptly, perhaps make it a bit longer.

Peace, Joe

I love ittttt!
So true and thoughtful.
:] Sweet, as well.
Keep up the amazing work hunni.
5/5