Comments : Beatings As Greetings

  • 17 years ago

    by haley mcclure

    This is a great poem, but very sad. =[ you should deff tell someone if this is really happening to you or someone you know bc nobody deserves that kind of relationship.

  • 17 years ago

    by Zeke

    I liked it. The opening left me a little off, but it does fill it's purpose in the end.
    An overall well composed poem. Congrats on your poetry skills,
    but boo unto heartbreak.