Comments : He's Moving

  • 17 years ago

    by Zeke

    Great expression of loss.
    I like the words you used, and the whole poem really seemed to scream silently your pain.
    Sorry for your loss.

  • 17 years ago

    by Aussie

    Lov is sad. lov is resky. every relationships end somepoint. this poem flows well. right to the point. nice peace:)