Wow that's all i can say
i loved it
xx

This poem was good. I like the meaning and the storyline. I do think that it would be better not to tell people the plot of the poem beforehand. This poem is one that seems meant to make people think to uncover the meaning or to interpret it different ways. Thats what helps to make poetry great I think. Overall, though, I really enjoyed reading it. ^.^ 5/5

Yea, I agree GothicVampyress, I just went and removed the explination. thx

I love the style of this poem! Every line flowed so smoothly! Another beautiful write! I cant say more how talented of a writer you are! Your choice of words are always great and so is the emotion you convey