Wow. Beautifully written. I loved it. Perfection

PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

Omg this poem is so very sad i was almost in tears i love this poem its long but not boring, the emotion was strong great write!!...5/5..=]

Beautiful.
i almost cried.
well done, keep it up.

Very moving, i love every line =D

This is so sad and so well written...superb write 10/5

Some poems are immortal. That was a rare one.