I really liked this poem. I like the way you ask the question at the end. Good Job!

To be honest, i wished it had a little mor flow or rhyme to it. [i know thats not what poetry is about] but i think the message would have come better to readers. I did like how in the end you turned it into a question to 'your one.'

Poetry is on how someone reads the poem, i think if you set it up into stanzas it would give us as readers a better idea how it should be read type thing.

its very cute though. good job. its also very true when it comes to crushes and so on. =]

-linds[[x]]

Aww this is a beautiful poem about loving someone and wanting to be loved in return. great job on it. i can relate to the words you wrote. 5/5

~Kristina

Awh this is sweet. it reminds me of this guy that i like right now. good job!