Great work!!
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This is Awsum! 5/5

Thats beautiful. I'm not crying. If thats what your thinking. I just...have something in my eye!
*clears throat*
Now where to begin, where to begin... One constructive crit: the start of the thrid stanza. What happened to my flow?!? I can understand the rounding off effect of the last but that one just bothered me... Aaaand fought doesnt rhyme with hot. BUT I'm going to stop being picky as I know how difficult it is to keep rhyme consistent and still have something intelligible at the end and you have done a fantastic job. This piece, despite my crits, (few, few crits) is stunning. The theme is consistent , beautiful imagery and word choice. Almost like a story and at the same time a...recount. Anyway I'd hate to fill up your commentary section with my nattering. POST!

Wow.... just beautiful!! I wanted to like cry!!! I am simply stunned. I love all your poems... I can't express in words how beautiful all your poems are!! Great flow and choice of words!! I just simply love it!! 5/5!!!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~
P.S. E-mail me sometime or something

Wow...wonderful. Absolutely beautiful and wonderful. I love it and feel the love throbbing from it. I read your other poem before this so I am guessing the girl broke your heart. I have found my own love, a month ago. But you can just read some of my poems to find out. 99 trillion/5.