Comments : The longest 10 minutes of my life: Pregnant.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Wow... so powerful. I loved the repetition you used and the different structure
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by 0AngelEyes0

    This one has to be one of my favorites of yours...I think it's horrible that so many girls have to go through these things alone...

  • 17 years ago

    by xXBrOk3n SoUlXx

    **i love this poem it is so powerful**

  • 16 years ago

    by Onoitsmandie

    Wow this poem is just WOW i'm speech less i love it did this really happen to you???

  • 16 years ago

    by Mark Harris

    Coming from a guy who's almost suffered through this I can say how beautiful the emotion you put into that was and how true all the thoughts that run through your head are! You really capture the moment and apply the reality of it to your poem. I. Love. It. :) Such a beautiful writer, keep going! xo

  • 16 years ago

    by dreamer

    WOW this is a stright up good poem
    (iz thiz fo real)
    But good work keep it up)
    holla back

  • 16 years ago

    by HisBrokenBaby

    Wow great poem.
    sadly its perfect for how i feel. soon i will face the longest ten minutes of my life