This was a diffrent poem! but good job on it! i really enjoyed it you really are a great writer!

Very dramatic story.
although for this stanza
"As Adam spoke to Eve
"In love we must believe."
"We can make our own life."
"We can make it just right.""

i think you should change it to this
As Adam spoke to Eve
"In love we must believe.
We can make our own life.
We can make it just right."

if you are stating that this is what he said, you only need one set of quotation marks.

5/5 good write