This poem is really deep bro, I totally undertsand the pain in this poem and sometimes all we want to do is die. We feel thats the only thing that can heel our pain, amazing poem 5/5

Excellent poem! Wow! I thought it was filled with strong emotion. I love the rhythm in it. It was simply great! Don't have any suggestions on how to make it better, cos it's already well-written!
5/5
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Wow this is deep, dark and sad. I hope it's ficticious and you aren't really feeling this way. Good job for this type of write.

Tripp.
bad.
i mean the plot,
not the poem.
actually, the poem is the shizzle.
but...ive been here. felt that. u know. ive poured my nice little guts out to u a couple times.
not a great way to live life, wishing for death...
keep up life tripp.
keep it up.
im here. always.

:( Things wont stop by jus killing yourself
Everyone who is left will have to pick up the pieces
Stop falling in to the dark pit
Get back up