So beautiful! This is a true poem of love. This speaks of the way true love should be. Excellent job!

Absolutely fantastic love it well done gem

Good ending. I loved that. I think this one was very pretty. you could see the girl (you lol) beating herself up over it and just so happy that the guy is still there!
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Very pretty. I would just change one thing:

Even when I get snappy
And take it out on you
You take it on the chin
And wait 'til I'm through

The last line I would either say wait until I'm through or And wait til I am through. I think it would flow better..Either way another beautiful read from you. Nice job!

Aw that was soo beautiful. its what loves all abut. im so happy for u and marcus. great job xx

"Any other couple
Would have broken apart
But it's because it's love
That I still have your heart"

So good as you already know! And I can relate which you also already know! lol I loved it!!
xoxo

Im glad it worked out for you and i must say im rosy red with envy :)))
ive done all that stuff and it didint work for me so yeah you're lucky :) og and another fantastic poem :)))