Wow! Nice collab! Very well done. I mean that was good with tons of descriptions that made it vivid and DARK! lol Sounds like a bad nightmare.
Charisma*

Excellent job! I loved this one. So diffrent!

Dark poems aren't my favorite knid but this was well done. 5/5

Great stuff never cease to amaze do you lol? keep it up

Nice poem. i enjoyed it. i like the dark poems.

This is Very heavy.....Some of the facts lately emerging about various prisons around the world, as well as many well-documented far-in-the-past events, make this a poetic spine-tingler, and a heart-breaker, and, a great reminder to pray for the suffering Souls.......well-done...
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for your consideration...line 6....valleys..is simply plural, and needs no apostrophe.....

Great job on this one. great use of words. very well written. xx

Lovely collab with Marcus! I loved it darling! Perfect!
xoxo

"No friendly face to help you now
The end seems near so take a bow
It seems like death is the only way out
A tortured soul that just can't shout
You beg to say your last goodbyes"
I can relate to that in ways you cant imagine, wow even tho you say its old i still loved it :)))