Comments : Failed attempts

  • 17 years ago

    by ShatteredGirl

    Excellent poem, well writen but very sad.. was it based on real ife, i hope not.. hope ur ok. good work on the poem xx

  • 17 years ago

    by LossxOfxControl

    Amazing, it was written down so well, so much emotion in it, I reall enjoyed reading it, I just hope that if it's real, you realise that there are so many people you can talk to, and it's not always easy, but sometimes it helps. Great job, look forwards to seeing more from you =]