Aww this is sad but I love it. I can relate 2 it, but from a girls point of view, but I've given up.

Very very good... loved this part:

"It's just that my cups been filled to the brim,
And now I'm drowning in the tears from within."

really good... keep it up!

This poem has got so much meaning, yet it seems so pointless, but if you dont mind - i have a POSSIBLE sollution, u dnt have to use it though

I wish I could bare my soul for all to see,
and no longer live with this fear of intimacy.
Yet here I am, again, weak with honesty.
Hiding behind pointless words
because I'm scared, afraid to talk to a girl

But what can you do,
when the woman you love,
loves with another.

And you can't help but feel undeserving of her love,
whenever you see them embrace one another
I don’t want to give up, don’t want to give in,
nevertheless, I'm drowning in the tears from within.

but its still a real good poem!

Narc xxx