Comments : Eyes wide shut

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Feeling confused?
    Too complicated?
    Is this not,
    What u anticipated?

    ^^I LOVED THAT PART. Great emotion and wonderful depth. Nicely done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I liked this poem, the flow was great, word choice wonderful the message loud and clear 5/5 very deep

  • 15 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    "The felling is like,
    I'm alive but dead,"

    - My favourite part, I know how that feels

    But I think you mean 'feeling' instead of felling'
    I really liked it. It was captivating and meaningful.
    5/5, Nice work