Very deep, I like the last part, it's so true, really really good (great, brilliant) work

The first parts were a bit confusing though

Now you see
How love could do great things
It could turn your life around
Or give you heaven and some wings
^^^
I really like this part Sherry.

I think your title fit quite perfectly and I like how you merged the second part in slowly with the first.

Take care deary

I appreciate your creativity. It's a nice style of writing. I enjoyed it. Well done!