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by Sarah
This poem was really nice, Wonderfully penned. You see the last stanza The very last wordAlmost nine years later From when we first met, I'll never lose you again So don't your (fret) You should have put it (forget) It makes it sound more poetic. But if you like it the way you have written it, then leave it the way it is. I'm just saying, thats all. Other then that, your poem was amazing 5/5. Take care, -Sarah A.