Comments : How Years Have Passed

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    This poem was really nice, Wonderfully penned. You see the last stanza

    The very last word

    Almost nine years later
    From when we first met,
    I'll never lose you again
    So don't your (fret)

    You should have put it (forget)

    It makes it sound more poetic. But if you like it the way you have written it, then leave it the way it is. I'm just saying, thats all.

    Other then that, your poem was amazing 5/5.

    Take care,

    -Sarah A.