This one really shows what a struggle someone goes through with an addiction. how it plays with your mind like theres another voice ruling every thought. Very good. Again I really hope your doing ok, drop me a comment so I know you are.

You are awesome. you really got the talent for describing the addiction, and the destruction to the highest power. good job

You say i could have written this better and i dont think i could because its personal to you. only you know what you are going through. i have never taken any drug but my girlfriend is a crack cocaine and heroin addict. i sit and watch her everyday as she slowly kills herself. ill write a poem about it. your work is good man.

Wow..thats all i can. amazing writing...
<3Elizabeth

Woooooooooooooow..i really liked it....haha i so know what u ment....i may be young but i soooo know what u ment lol haha. good poems..thanks for commenting mines :)
~vanessa

This is really really well written, 5/5

Wow this is really good i really like it and im happy u stopped drugs and idk how it feels to have to go though everyday without trying some but i bet its really hard so im really happy ur strong enough to stop trying drugs!well anywayz 5/5 <3

Wow..deep...i can relate to this on also..5/5 from me

I love your poems great work! And thanks for reading mine. I feel this poem..I gave it a 5.. You got talent

I understand every word of it, amazing!

I love ur poems cy =] and i love ur advice. but i dont know what you mean by break it up...im so glad ur commenting again =]

Love it...
this speaks for its self

some people go through some pretty hard things huh

Love it...
this speaks for its self

some people go through some pretty hard things huh

Thanks. Your truth helps me with my own demons.

OMG you are right
this was such a good read
i really enjoyed this !!
5/5

Understood.
i love this!
<3 5/5

my fave part---> i'am your addiction, i'am your affliction
I AM YOUR DISEASE

it just kinda finishes but continues it in words unsaid... if that makes any sense to u... lol

Omg... that was amazing... and im sitting here tears welling up in my eyes speechlees i couldnt have describe it better =)

You are such a great writer! You can tell you actually went through these experiences. I only know them by second-hand and watching many family members & friends go thru it, but your writes put me in your head in the addiction itself. WoW, what power! Keep it up, you're amazing! 5/5

Wow man ive been doing it for a year atleast 2 times a week..that was really good..it got me thinking about life

Really well written, I love it