Comments : Red paintbrush strokes.

  • 17 years ago

    by tearsxunseen

    I really like this poem. it's easy for me to understand, but at the same time it has a LOT of meaning.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow this poem was very deep and amazing, I loved the paint analogy and the mention of the faeries, I like how you didnt overuse the word crimson like most poets do when they use this topic, and I also love the fact that you focused on a different focal point not the "my life sux im gonna cut myself" one but painting and strokes and stuff, it made this poem much more enjoyable to read. Nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Anita

    I can't even begin to explain the way this poem made me feel. You created a fantastic mood (well, depressing, but...FANTASTIC!!!). It's an amazing poem; & I know you keep hearing that, but God... it's so true.
    GREAT job. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. Wow. Your poems have so much meaning in them. Amazing work!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Daisha

    This poem is amazing. I love all of the poems you write. Keep up the awesome work!

    Here is a quote that this reminded me of:
    Sign your name upon my wrists,
    So everyone knows who left me like this.