For your first poem on here, this is amazing.
I loved the different comparisons
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

Thank you so much,
im glad you liked it
-liz-

Wow..this is great!...i love your writing...thanks for the comment!>...i really appreciate it...comment back?lol

I like this poem its really original!!! keep writing!! :)

Hey lizzie,its pinkston as u call me
very original as naomi said....keep it up and you'll b gr8!!!

Great work!!!! =]