Hey darl i thught u wrote this really good. there was alot of emotion coming through. great use of words also. a touching ppoem. good job. xx

Ok this is excellent

My head was saying to just forget you,
But you know what they say; patient's a virtue.

that's deff my favourite line

but anyway i dunno wot's wrong with him, it's g8... 5/5

Thats amazing!!!!!! i kept thinking damn i know what she means!!!!

**~**kaylee**~**

Great write! i love it.. its has a great flow.. nice job!

OMG!!!THAT SOUNDS JUST LIKE ME...I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!