Ill tell u wht i luv most bout your poetry
your flow, rythme and everything just blends and its so original
5/5

Love it .great rythm .EXCELLENT

Love this poem, it flows brilliantly, excellent work, keep writin,
___xox

That's so very sweet! it reminds me of one of my friends so much. i like it.

It's very ironic that the guy I am in love with is named David. lol. This is a great poem, it's very sweet and your flow and rhyming seems natural. Keep it up. =]

Tammie

Awww this is so adorable nice job!

This is a really sweet poem David.
You are a great poem. 5/5

Kalee

Aw I loved this poem. It was so heartfelt and flowed ever so nicely.I want it to be a song & for someone to sing it to me lol. Beautiful write! 5/5

marcella

OMG, now this is my favorite, i love how everything just fits, and your ryhming, it was perfect and wast forced at all, great job, 5/5

OMG, now this is my favorite, i love how everything just fits, and your ryhming, it was perfect and wast forced at all, great job, 5/5

Excellent work...lovely choice of words...perfect rhyming and great flow too...so touching and well written!..kp it up!