Hun, this is soo good. You had such good description in it.....I could see it. That was amazing.....I look up to you.
xoxo

Beautifully penned sad poem. A broken heart sure does give a poet a lot to write about. Nice job!

"I hand over my strength and surrender all power
My courage is weakened like a crumbling tower"

I loved those two lines, is this a type of sonnet by any chance? I just saw the 14 lines, lol.
5/5 as always!
*Gem*

This is really good but I'm so suprised that you rhymed heart and part! lol! I had to read it twice to make sure I wasn't seeing it wrong. Heehee! :) But it was really good. Keep it up!!!
~Midnight Sun