Amazing.
I personally can't do acrostics, but you accomplished it magnificently! =] Emotions were wonderful and everything was plain perfect. You couldn't get any better than this right here. Wonderful write, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn. =]

Good job exactly,keep on writing...

I beleive this was written for a contest.
I really did like this one, i find acrostic's very hard tp accomplish, but you did a wonderful job.
this was great!
love Tara-Kay

Wow this is really good.. i like it alot i can relate.. well good job

Beautifully written! very incredible line's

That was really well written. I know how difficult it can be to write Acrostic's but you did a great job on this one. Nice flow, rhyming naturally and expressing alot of emotion. I really enjoyed reading it. =] 5/5

Tammie

Oh wow. This was such a good poem that I didn't see the word spelled out with the first letters! Usually I do, I've done this kind of thing before. ^-^ Really wonderful poem. It's kind of sad, though beautiful. I really enjoyed it alot.

This was great!!

I really like your poem. i love the whole acrostic thing too. it makes it a lot more difficult to write but you conquered that well.

Wow, I love this. It was so amazingly beautiful & kinda sad! I 'm jealous. I wish I thought of this! Lol. Amazing job, really. It flowed really well & was very descriptive.

Keep it up

Bri.x

Bryan, this is another great piece of your great works, you are an amazing writer, keep up the great job, waiting to read more of your works.

Very touching..lots of emotion..

WOW... that was really in depth. It really touches the heart.

XXIvyXX

Comment #8:
Extremely powerful! I loved it! And once again the acrostic fit...it wasn't forced, it just flowed. And the whole message was beautiful...all of your work is! :) 5/5 once again!
~Midnight Sun

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this girl stole your poem

Aw this is so cute<3

Wow that was a really good poem i cant believe i almost cry and believe me its heard to make me cry lol i really loved your poem i hope you wright more!!!!!!!!!!!